Fix up this email for me Hi Jill, I just finished reading your email,. I really appreciate your feedback and would love if you could clarify what specific areas you'd like me to focus on more. I understand that some of my comments aren't appropriate for the kids to hear, and I'll make sure to be more mindful of that going forward. While this role has turned out to be a little different from what I initially expected, I'm really enjoying the experience and working with everyone here. I'm eager to grow in this position and would appreciate any additional feedback you can offer when you return. I hope your trip goes smoothly and that everyone has a fantastic time. Best regards, ~ Emmitt

Hi Jill,

I hope this email finds you well. I wanted to thank you for your valuable feedback. I truly appreciate your input and would be grateful if you could provide more specific guidance on areas where I can improve. I understand that some of my previous comments may not have been suitable for the kids, and I will make sure to be more cautious and considerate in the future.

While this role has presented some unexpected challenges, I am enjoying the experience and am eager to grow and learn. I would be delighted to receive any additional feedback you may have when you return. I wish you a smooth and enjoyable trip, and I look forward to seeing you all soon.

Best regards,
~ Emmitt